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June 17, 2013 – “Dawn Dances On”

We forge onward through the morning mist.
The night was slow as we traversed a past flood.
Now, finally, to new lands!
How wonderful to see
Different grasses, trees, & flowers.

We continue westward!
The sun rises in our backs.
Oh, dawn!
That true beginning;
As our movement’s friction with the train-tracks,
It feels like it is we that bring it upon us;
Not the sun that emerges forth,
But the Earth’s very rotating pulse.

Yes! Our own determined dash;
The natural rhythm of the universe:
Revolution!
While the sun,
Glorious & solemn,
Awaits us with open arms.

8 comments on “June 17, 2013 – “Dawn Dances On”

    • I’m very happy that you’ve found this encouraging,
      And grateful that you share that timeless love for poetry.
      This one was on the way to Chicago from Boston.

  1. “Not the sun that emerges forth,
    But the Earth’s very rotating pulse.

    Yes! Our own determined dash;
    The natural rhythm of the universe:
    Revolution!
    While the sun,
    Glorious & solemn,
    Awaits us with open arms.”

    Brilliant!!

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